Friday, December 12, 2008



Michael said...

Diggin everything but the type done for the title. It's not very tight, and the letters could look less generic. I think if you found an existing typeface to base it off of, and redrew its letters with the same simple, loose style the comic has, it'll bump up the quality of the whole piece.

jaime said...

I'm glad to see this on the computer, because some of the subtlety is appearing here, and I really like seeing more texture. Your challenge will be getting a print that shows this off properly.

As far as what Michael mentioned about the lettering, You could certainly try a tighter font, but could also consider popping this one just a bit more. I just think the type gets a little lost.

Colors are great here. I do want to see more of this, so hope you continue with it.